Parkvale School

Parkvale School

Monday 15 June 2015

Autumn Leaves


 Autumn Leaves
Whoosh! The leaves are falling off the branches onto the grass. I see red leaves and there were lots of yellow leaves. Crunch! crunch! The leaves crunch under my tiny toes. I see a warm leaf blanket on the field.
Amelia



















Autumn Leaves
Leaves falling down on my head and when they fell on my head it felt like a magazine or newspaper on my head.I heard leaves going crunch when I walked on them.There were green, yellow, orange and red leaves.

By Maisie


Autumn Leaves
Drop, drop went the leaves. The wind blows all the leaves. The wind went fast and blew across the tree. I can see colourful leaves. Red, green, orange and brown. When I stomped on them they made a crackle sound.
Kamal

1 comment:

  1. Super vocabulary in your writing. I love autumn because of all the colourful leaves. The detail in your writing helped me to imagine autumn.

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